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I took my feedback ant tried to incorporate it into this elevator pitch. I thought all the feedback I received was very helpful! I tried to make it more understandable to my audiences. I worked on getting the audience's attention with voice changes and hand motions. I definitely feel a lot more comfortable making my elevator pitch in front of a camera, and I do believe my elevator pitch has improved greatly!
Hi Kelly,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job captivating your audience by changing the tone of your voice and using your hands. I like how you mentioned the need your service would be solving. I also think the description of your service was thorough and easy to understand. I think having a diverse restaurant would be very convenient. It always takes my family forever to chose where to go out, so this would solve the problem.
You painted a good picture. I liked how you explained how America is a diverse country with many different cultures but no place to eat that caters to all cultures. Also, I agree talking in front of a camera can be difficult. However, it got better with practice. Good job on the last elevator pitch!
ReplyDeleteHey Kelly,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job this time with your pitch. Your product is something that could be useful for many people, especially in the food industry. As always, talking in front of a camera can be difficult but you did a great job!