https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IDgW214O1o&feature=youtu.be
All of the feedback that I received was both insightful and useful, it help me improve my elevator pitch! I thought all of my feedback was incredibly nice and supportive and I didn't change much to my presentation based on the feedback that I received. I did try to talk louder and use different hand gestures.
I enjoyed your pitch! While I didn't watch your last video, your sound levels were good and you had a wide variety of hand motions that enhanced your pitch. You did a great job of explaining your business idea. I didn't know what your idea was prior to watching your video, and I think the order of your pitch gave me a great understanding of it.
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